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The path I follow now

A path of deceitful change

followed by one, lost and already destroyed.

No one will ever complete this life

walking through hate and judgement

a cemetery of hopes and broken desires

My back is cracking beneath the weight of this rage

everyone I meet tries to alter my choices

my feet stick to the ground and my heart sinks

my skin rips open and blood spills out

No pain, just unending confusion

I pick up a needle and sew this gash shut

Another scar will eventually form my prediction,

but this one will not heal.

The threads fall from my sight

I search and keep searching

What I want or need is never found

Though I continue down this weary walk

crawling on my scraped and burdened knees...

Never to find my true path.

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  • LionessK Greeters member
    July 4
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    welcome to allpoetry

    A vivid write full of pain and sadness... memories felt through words. The picture compliments your words well also. Very nicely put together. I am glad you found a way to express yourself (creatively).
    Keep reading, writing and sharing. You will find many who realte.


    ~Kristy