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~Dark beauty

Enchantress lies upon her dreaming bed
Viewing her kingdom to be,miles ahead
Curving waves,mysteries unfolds
She wonders what truth may hold
behind that misty sky
can she fly.



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  • samiceylanc
    August 26
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    Hoş ses veren bir şiir.
    (Nice sound in poetry.)

  • Moondragoon
    August 22
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    wow this is awsome!! the words fall in beautifully.
    i love the rhyme that you had plotted here in this poem. well done

    ~Miranda~

  • nosgoth
    July 17
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    nice combination of words

  • AngelWithDarkWings gold member
    July 4

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    I like your take on the prompt, one that was all your own.. excellent job with the poem..

    good luck

    kat


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 4

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    can she fly.................? now thats the question.... great take on prompt... thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest.....!

  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    July 4

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    Wow...Immortal is right it is amazing...I adore your take on the picture prompt....

    Well done and good luck!

  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    July 4

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    This is a unique take on the prompt... It's amazing how so many different artists can see such different things in the same picture. Well done, and good luck!

    Laura x

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