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From One Person to Two

Infected with milky poison, a seeming
parasite begins its venture.

Swollen guts spews a tiny living creature
after nearly a year of occupation.

But this is no alien habitation tale,
nor the story of a needed quarantine.

Only one actually natural incident
creates these circumstances

(which otherwise would be cause
for more than passive concern):

Pregnancy.

Author notes

Pregnant! Transforming into a mother, but first I'll become a huge Buddha statue.

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  • Gypsie Ink
    July 8, 2008

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    Interesting

    "Infected with milky poison" your choice of wording is most definitely charming. A unique write. Thank you for your entry and best of luck.


  • Mila7
    July 4, 2008

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    My god!! amazing poem! I was so not expecting it. So good, and the beginning you describe conception as something completely different. Great poem, really good.