Lights rupture,
as sanity dissipates,
in skins sugary scent.
While the noise escalates
he reprimands our thirst,
leisurely marching away.
Author notes
Goodbyes to a nobody by ~Mama-Mia
(Deviantart)-Please credit in AN
'We knew it was wrong but we did it anyway and now he's gone'
20 Words
This is something similar to what my dad did to my boyfriend and I....♥
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- Sensual Salvation PIF - Quickie 10 x 20 words by Cannonsfire.
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Comments
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excellent word usage in this piece. in such a short length, the imagery you captured is quite superb.
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Hmmm I like this a lot!
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Oh those notes make this so very sad hun...
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