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Trapped

Drenched in terror of my future
 Fear rattles my present senses
All thoughts overcome with pessimism
 Darkness and shadows drift near
Trapping me with no escape
 Changes become inevitable

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Written January 4th, 2004

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  • asian-tequila
    March 13, 2004
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    10/10

    Dezi this poem is awesome. I can totally relate to this. I agree with Hannah, you should write more.

    -thekla
    Edited on Mar 13, 11:53 p.m. because ''.

  • *MiXed*Emotion*
    January 10, 2004
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    Wow Dezi this is really good! I really do love this!You should start writing more!

    **Hannah