There are spaces in those places
Where heaven dances 'twixt your soul
And those breezes and butterfly sneezes
Are out of reach beyond your control
There are motions of sacred oceans
filled with universal skies
As those visions filled with expressions
Dance before our dazzled eyes
While those moments of togetherness
Bound by voices filled with fire
Greater stories bound in glories
To which we all can each aspire
There are pieces between the creases
Where our future often lies
And this journey of new learnings
Stretch before us as time flies
New beginnings and future winnings
All express our one true goal
That love forever while we're together
Is well within all of our control
Author notes
2. But let there be spaces in your togetherness and let the winds of the heavens dance between you. Love one another but make not a bond of love: let it rather be a moving sea between the shores of your souls.
Kahlil Gibran
A contest entry
- Gibran Khalil Gibran ~ by Ruby34.
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Comments
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Wonderful piece here..second entry with same quote which is my favorite also..you did it justice ..thank you
Ruby
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Absolutely stunning...
This is absolutely stunning here...Gibran is one of my favorites and you've done really well with this quote! Congrats cause this is surely a winner! All the best...
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A moving sea ...
between two shores ... and you took it to the height and depth of thought! Nice work poet ... and may these thoughts be the life-saver as we free-fall into eternity's bright beginnings. joy
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Lovely take on the prompt, I chose the same one for similar reasons, it spoke a lot of sense. Good luck Love, C
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