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The Agony

Missing image
of
knowing you now
hearing your voice
knowing your touch
loving you so -

Nothing
compared to
having lost
these things.















FIRST ATTEMPT:

It was here,
right here.
We shared our most intimate moments
laughing, loving, crying.

I shed a tear -
many a tear,
mourning how I lost your love
and all those precious moments

I'd slice an ear,
no, each ear
off, just to see your precious face
in fact, I'm even trying.

I lay here,
right here,
where we were the most, and
put myself again through all this torment.



Author notes

Propmt:
Goodbye to Nobody by Mama Mia @ DeviantArt

Poem 1: 20 Words
Poem 2: First Attempt

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  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 4
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    Did a great job to get the 20 words out of this and say the exact same thing. Well done. Love, C