I want to yet can't
sweeping through the motions
why don't they come...?
I feel them stir
trapped in my chest's cauldron
if only i could cut them out
to gush lakes upon the floor
grape vodka brought them to my eyes
saving myself from their demise
infront of another's sight
i held them back
they churn and burn with the alocohol
sickening my stomach
why won't they come again?
hear and now
not giving a damn
who hears
who is watching
let my soul bleed!
stain my cheeks!
let their acidic drops fall in torrents!
their fuel...my pain... my hurts
all unknown to me... held subconciously
too long unsurfaced
rushing the gates, the flood begins
filling small oceans into my palms
every teary fluid ounce that lay trembling
i see in the reflection... not myself
just every broken
piece of
Me
Please tell me what you think
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powerful!!!
hey chelsy this is a pretty deep emotional piece if ever i read one!!
i've been here feeling like this so many times in the past as i'm sure have alot of other people, who will all relate to this so well!!
its been a long time since i spent anytime here catchin up with old friends i do hope you're ok and this piece was more a confirmation of your talent than something true and happening in your life right now, i've missed chatting with u as we used to, infact i miss all the guys i made friends with here!!
keep up the good work sweety, and keep smiling...
much love,
jayjay xxx
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Jayjay
Thanks Jayjay!! I really appreciate your thoughts a lot on this , piece
. I know what you mean! I used to be obssessed with being on here and chatting with you and the few other friends I made on here. Gosh it's truly good to hear from you! Things are going alright with me nothing too tramatic everything's just chilled. I hope things are going well with you! Can't wait to hear back from ya! Anyways... my email's on my 'author' page if you ever wanna drop me a line there or anything!
Take care, can't wait to catch on you here again!
<3 Chelsy
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