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The Outcome Of Our Sin




Lust overcame
        ~us, two fools

Seduced and consumed
                  ~it wasn't right

He found us together
                  ~ and stormed out

      ~For good...

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'We knew it was wrong but we did it anyway and now he's gone'

Goodbyes to a nobody by ~Mama-Mia
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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    July 3

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    This was excellent, and like Cannonsfire stated..."ouch!"....

    I love the way you set the poem itself. It makes you want to continue reading it...

    Well done and good luck in the contest!


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 3
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    Ouch! lol C