I walked the edge of the blade,
my feet sliced,
I fell, and tumbled into
my personal hell.
It's a place I visit often.
Some see a magical land,
but it's only a mirage.
My attempt to disguise.
The beautiful pool,that you see,
it was flled by my tears,
and they often see my smile,
but it only hides my fear.
I am not near as strong
or couragous,
as many do assume..
I just try to hide my pain
as I await my impending doom.
Please tell me what you think
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Job well done. I, too, wear the mask of a smile to hide what's deep within.
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There were a couple typos, but you gave great imagery. A sad poem but you did a good job.
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I think I fixed the typo's. I often write in the dark , by the light of my laptop, lol.. which can make seeing the keys a bit hard on the eyes. But I am getting better at typing in the dark.LOL..thanks for the comment.
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