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The -ing.

She who waits for poetic justice
smooth and cool like turning over imagination stones
rubbing the corners of your mind.
The irredesence of opal
pink green white blue yellow pastel and dancing
The tip of the artist's brush touching water,
a symbolically fluid motion.

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  • Darkmoon
    July 3, 2008
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    I really enjoyed it but why did you call it "the -ing"?


    • Harleqyn
      July 11, 2008
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      sorry, i just saw your message. thats the "waiting" in the authors comments. funny, when you said that though i had no idea what i was talking about either lol. just one of those things i guess... thanks for the comment!! :) -julia