Leaving behind all that I worked for
For a new life for something better something more
Hunting and searching for the answers to life
Discarding my feelings of pain, suffering and strife
Looking back on the descions that made this happen
Trying to find a buckle for my mind because it came unfastened
Inside my head I regret all the things that I did
For all the emotions from the people I loved, I hid
A contest entry
- S.O.S Quickie!!!! by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended July 12, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think about it honestly?
Comments
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very good!
I love this Nathan! I guess a lot of the emo kids can write. GO US!!!
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Bravo!
Very nice Nathan! Keep it up hon! Your stuff is really good! Love yah!
Much love,
~Kayla~
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This was a great write. Good luck in the contest.
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