Think about what you tell me as you cover me with seduction,
make me heart race and my blood burn
as your fierce eyes gaze into mine.
see me as who i am when you seal my person with your harsh but sweet kisses.
where i lay wondering what you would do if i died
what would you do if i spilled my blood
if my body turned to stone and was cold.
How would you feel?
i won't say good bye
not now
not ever,
take me into your arms and keep me there.
would you live if you found out that your beloved was dying?
my long hair fallen out.
my nails burning with desire.
my world is black
yours is fading
its all over
you,me,life
always and forever
GONE..
A contest entry
- Dark Quickie by Luckintheshadows.
550 points, ended July 4, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how does this person feel??
Comments
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i liked this one,
it is just like the world im going through right now
PERFECT!
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*shivers* what a beautifully dark write. this really sent chills screaming down my spine, this kind of macabre love affair...lovely stuff!!!!
You've done an excellent take on the prompt.
Thanks for sharing this, and for entering my contest,
Luck.
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