Newlywed and still becoming
comfortable with their new situation,
each in a world not quite their own,
She said, “Sometimes you’re a mess and
you don’t even know you’re a mess
and that’s what worries me.”
And he said three words
that reminded me of a vision I once had
about the idiot and thief crucified
to the left and right of Christ.
As they go on I am reminded of another vision,
one where the ground is parched and
two martyrs face each other,
each almost crucified,
each needing one more spike.
A contest entry
- Gibran Khalil Gibran ~ by Amarige.
800 points, ended July 27, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I enjoyed the read..this is beautiful..you didn't put the quote you choose in your AN but I know which one you did choose..best wishes thank you
Ruby
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This is great stuff. The last stanza is what defines good writing I think. Very clear and without any of those poetic frills some people use. You let the poem do the work for you. Admirable.
I likes.
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