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Child Abuse

Come to me for love so true is where love is renewed Embarassed

Hear my heartbeat and hold my hand I'm there just for youLaughing
In my home you shall see no pain Cry
Leave your world of horror and be reborn againLaughing
Don't be scared this love is not of tears and pain Surprised

About you I shall wrap my wings and heal your soul Laughing
Because my love is forever you know Kiss
Unconditional love where tears never fall Wink
Sweet angels shall watch from up above Innocent
Enter my heaven where love is more than enoughLaughing

Author notes

I become infuriated when I see the amount of child abuse on the TVs and how people continue to treat sex like its a twister game and they care nothing if children are born they don't take care of them well if there is a man out there jumping around like a rabbit fix him and the same for the women for every one of them have a brain only they refuse to use it and without a brain you rare incompetent to care for a child .

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  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    what a well done

    Acrostic with a strong and worthy message. I enjoy the acrostic form iot is a fun form to write with and not too difficult a form to tackle , good write


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 15, 2008

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    The use of the emoticons really brings this to a peak; it is sweetly penned as you show love and kindness not often expressed in our society

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 4, 2008

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    Nicely composed acrostic. I agree with your AN. My state just had its first amber alert. The kidnapper has been caught and is now facing a federal death penalty.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 4, 2008
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    Leave your world of horror and be reborn again Laughing Don't be scared this love is not of tears and pain wonderful emotions withinyour words and you have described the word of love wonderfully true love has no abuse at all good luck in the contest my freind and keep your powerful thoughts sailing


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 4, 2008

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    this was great and a neat way to do it.... i so wish i could have been born into your home maybe i wouldnt be sooo f-ed up now..... thanks for being you and being so kind to others......... hugs.......granny!

  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 3, 2008

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    This was a great poem. =D But grandma... you forgot a few letters btw. But awesome poem. =D Good luck!!

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