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Garden of Evil

unconsecrated ground
with all
but echoes gone

A contest entry

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  • DogFish silver member
    December 13, 2008
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    ...this gives me goose bumps!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    ooo...this is good. I really like this piece
    good luck


  • McRae by nature
    November 30, 2008

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    Really amazing Haiku you have here. I love the idea of complete abandonment save for a few distant echoes. Very haunting.

    Carrie


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 11, 2008

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    Speaks so much of powerful emptiness, as if it were an entity... filled with echos.
    I would prefer this without the title - just the haiku... it can have multiple meanings. Either way still a great haiku!
    Marlene


  • Kelli Marie
    July 5, 2008

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    Oh, this is a profound haiku in my humble opinion. Very well written. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli

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