I could easily replay the good days,
word for word, line for line,
but sometimes, things change,
and the melody of the friendship
takes on a different note.
Maybe not so much as
a full octive higher,
or lower,
but you realize,
that the chords at least,
must change.
Or the song gets all played out.
Yea, maybe it's stuck in your head,
and you sing it without thinking,
but the meaning of it has become flat.
The friendship, deaf to tone,
the only choice is to make the changes needed,
to save yourself, and the song.
Author notes
sort of just wrote it without really thinking. I wanted it to be a free write, from the heart..
A contest entry
- when... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 4, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like the inner tone of this verse...thanks for the wonderful entry in my contest..I love this work indeed..
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your always so sweet.. I appreciate that you read my writings. I feel honored as I think you are one of he most talented writers I have ever known..and feel free to pray for me anytime. I am in a place right now, that prayer could do nothing but help!!!
much love to you, be blessed.
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