Exhaling stardust within my sighs
tears dry from solar winds;
Light-speed equations tattooed
upon dark matter
revealing hidden maps
swirling on weightless cosmology
as dreams
hollow themselves into
alien suns and moons.
From the base of this world
I await frequencies from home.
Author notes
Artist Credit:
S.O.S by =gucken on deviantart.com
prompt is: Stardust
A contest entry
- S.O.S Quickie!!!! by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended July 12, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF......word prompt. by islekine.
625 points, ended July 31, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely penned...thanks for entering!
Best wishes in the contest!!
Write on!
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Very intriguing story line you have here from the perspective of the alien invader, no less. Great take on the prompt, Congratulations on your Gold.
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this was tremendous. great wording made this a spectacular read. I enjoyed the mystical powers for which you wrote this.
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Very deserving of the Gold. I enjoyed this and hope to read more of your works. Pen on...
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Jeeze
This is amazing, good job I expessilly like the picture. Its very out there.
I love how you made it sound like home.
This is very well writen and the vocab, you used. This is one of the best I read today.
My favorite part was.
VVVVVVVVVVVVV
tears dry from solar winds;
Light-speed equations tattooed
upon dark matter
Its very good and I like how you said that the tears were dryed from the winds. This is an awesome poem.
Good write,
<3Kelsea
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nice i liked the word choice on this congrats on the gold too
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