there is no doubt,
amongst the shadowed moments
storm is moving
and in the darkest hour
there will always be
me
A contest entry
- Misunderstood Love by Riftkin.
525 points, ended July 10, 12 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
Love that is misunderstood..
no matter how little
causes pain and sadness
Thank you for taking this
to your own place
best of luck
Riftkin
-
uplifting
This is a beautiful emotion expressed in a succinct, flowing poem. It gives a rise to the heart of the lover. Wonderful.
-
How true!
-
I've come to the conclusion that the only person I can truly depend on is me. From the poem I gather you did the same. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
-
-
No Leo, lol it was written to someone from me
-
-
Sis you have caught the true essence of love as we all know the waters are not always calm. Brilliant take on the prompt beautifully penned a credit to you There are times when the poem needs little support just allow yourself to get caught up within the lines....this is such a poem. Good luck in the contest.
-
-
Thanks Mook, deliriously happy here so it had to be a happy ending
-
-
Very sweet.
-
And such a safe haven you are. Warm and dependable, always there a wonderful friend.
Who just happens to write extremely well.
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
