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♥ a.D.D.I.C.T.I.O.N ♥

{{wake up}} I need you!!

First ... Taste (im addicted)

~Breath you in~
Swallow you whole;;
Take me under--your spell

<<--Keep me high-->>

D.o.n.t - L.E.T - m.e - F
                                  A
                                    L
                                      L

Let ''me love you ♥

B E ... A D D I C T E D...

                    {{{ Be my last thought}}}

I'm , Completely , Addicted , To , You , !!!

Author notes

Sorry im addicted to my boyfriend

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Comments


  • alone-n-emo
    July 4
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    i love it

    you made a total point to this poem i love your way with words. great job.
    love,
    tre

  • hardeepb
    July 4

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    Nice poem!

    Dirty pretty is an awkward style...but it's different! Sometimes it works and I like this a lot! Gets the message across nicely, good luck contest!