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Sorrow

My heart has bled one thousand times
To feelings I can't explain
A million things that I miss
And i know i can't regain
A feeling of lonliness engulfs my world
And ruins every aspect
I try my hardest and do my best
And I still don't gain respect
Lost in the shadows
Memories forgotten
I'm going to die alone
When I need him, when my hearts grieving
He can't even answer the phone.

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  • DyingSlowlyInside
    August 12, 2008
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    This is great!
    You voice what i feel


  • Coloured Skies
    July 30, 2008

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    great!

    i love all of your poems but this one is good too i like the way it rhymes on different lines...x
    great work hope your writing goes well in the future..=]


  • dropdeadcute
    July 24, 2008
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    awwwesome

    epic win that is awesome and sad if i sond a lil upbert its not the poem it is just how i speak