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Folds

Missing image

Of fated kiss that thunders

the very folds in heart's passion raiment,

as it lies untouched and dulled

from the famine in fire.

 

Awaken is the earthquake longings,

unmerciful behemoths of need,

that roar as lions to be fed

from love's banquet table.

 

Romance's zephyr wind

blasts in fury through the soul's veil,

visions flush with tales of oneness,

faith flows to hope's foundation,

holding onto dream this time

will last forever.

 

One word passing through awkwardly arrayed,

brings a tailspin of twisting and torrid doubts,

buttons pushed on memory's control board,

finger's grasp on lace of wedding desires,

slips into canyon of dark scars.

 

Language of the tongue

ever a dialogue without rules,

except as written in intuitive dictionary,

where sometimes the interpretation

brings hugs of reconciliations

bonds from out of the verbal knots,

others it produces a noose of regret,

strangling the spirit

with suffocation of trust.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    July 10

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    Love that is misunderstood.. no matter how little causes pain and sadness Thank you for taking this to your own place best of luck Riftkin

  • Vivid vocabulary...

    I love many of the phrases you use, such as 'suffocation of trust' and 'a dialogue without rules' 'memory's control board' amongst others. Each one is full of thought and leads the mind to wander. That is an experience in itself. Further to that, the images you write and the skill you show in doing so go together to make a beautiful poem.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 4
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    for got your clappies


  • maralisa silver member
    July 4

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    wonderful emotions on loves misunderstading especialy strangling the spirit with a suffucation of trust because true love must endure honesty and trust beautiful poem the following line were wonderful
    Romance's zephyr wind blasts in fury through the soul's veil,visions flush with tales of oneness,faith flows to hope's foundation holding onto dream this time will last forever.others it produces a noose of regret,strangling the spirit with suffocation of trust.g0ood luck in the contest
  • *strangling the spirit with suffocation of trust.* You said it! I was going to write for this prompt, but after reading this, why waste my time lol, it's awesome as usual and I hope you win!! Beautifully written.

    Linda

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