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You're Not to Blame




shady mouths
crave custard
to share sweetness
but the needles
from dark ships
seem to always
pass through

will I ever be
your sky?




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  • Swan song gold member
    July 5

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    This is deep and a poem of lovely contemplation.
    It is a poem to read again and again let it go where you mind wants to go and your heart to


  • leo2
    July 5

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    I guess it was removed from the contest. It's a bit too abstract for me to wrap my mind around but I get the feeling there are some deep emotional scars involved here.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • sheltered
    July 3
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    I'm so ready to give up this site that it doesn't really mean much to me

  • sheltered
    July 3

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    Nah, i'd much prefer to allow the people responsible to see the true unjustice and I did write Kevin personally... we'll see if he gives a fuck?

  • sheltered
    July 3
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    I am truly sorry that the "new rules " of this site don't allow for free expression so I will be forced to delete this contest even thnough such rules have not been actually realized by the general public... ( you and me ) A fucking casualty we are but I do trult thank you for this entry... awesome!

    • Cannonsfire silver member
      July 3
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      lol Just change the dates everyone else does it and I'll russle you up some entries...promise

  • sheltered
    July 3
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    You know my good friend Champrins eh?

    I last heard she was coming to Canada for a visit?

    I hope so.

    Peace and love dear...

    • Cannonsfire silver member
      July 3
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      Oh yes I do, wondered where she'd got too so that explains it lol..hope you do get to meet her, she writes so well. Love, C

      • sheltered
        July 3
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        Thanks... I hope so too
        she is a gem like you

        • Cannonsfire silver member
          July 3
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          Awww shucks Sir, jest dabbling in me pohms

          • sheltered
            July 3
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            And so I will....

            • Cannonsfire silver member
              July 3
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              pfft...if we wrote to just win trophies then they would only always be just words

          • sheltered
            July 3
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            The thing that woulde really sudck is if i had to cancel this contest on the basis of these so called new rules that have no basis dealt on realism...... Good luck with that Keven... although i've yet to actually read them....

  • sheltered
    July 3
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    wow... i love this and wish nothing more but to someday be your sky... lol


  • Sailor Ptolema gold member
    July 3

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    nice!!!!


    LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!

    bravo!!

    ~ S.P.

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