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The Only Thing I've Prayed For...

All I ever wanted and all I ever dreamed of
Is right here in my arms
And all I ever thought I'd never have is right here in front of me
All the things I'd hoped and prayed for and could barely NOT think about
Are the only things I see now
All the love and passion I'd always thought of
Is right here, RIGHT HERE
Right where I can hold it
Where I can touch it
To make sure it's real
And not some sort of fantasy
I don't have to pretend like its real anymore
Because I KNOW it's real
Everything around me is becoming more and more alive
And all of the Love bestowed in me
Is like an overgrown Rain Forest
So Full of Life, and Love, and Splendor, and Joy
It's a utopia I'd never thought could be seen by these broken
And distorted eyes of mine
But now it's all a reality
A beautiful reality
And not some game show that just 'gives' it all to me
I worked for it
I sacrificed for it
And nothing means more to me
Then Having You In My Life
Having The only thing I ever, EVER prayed for
A girl who could show Me True Love
The TRUE Potential of the Human Heart
That's What I prayed for
It's the Only Thing I've Prayed For
The Only thing I wanted God to Give Me
To Show Me
Excessive Happiness

Author notes

Over enjoyment about being IN LOVE

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  • gigglesalot
    December 6, 2008
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    I enjoyed the flow of this, a little repetitive at times, but good. good luck in the contest


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    July 24, 2008

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    Awe this is amazing!! isnt love freakin awesome?? I love this poem!! Thank you mucho for entering!!

    Oz


  • Kiwi Grimm
    July 3, 2008
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    hehe *blushes*
    one of my favorites