Dear Love,
Long gone
is it.
I've been
empty
You
much the same
You've been crying
Tell me
again
What's your name?
I can't
even cry
as I
part from you
I hope
you can't
cry either
And see
this rhyme
Coming too.
Signing off,
Your ____
Author notes
Lost Love
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration with Options by Dancing Feather.
700 points, ended July 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is this any good at all?
Comments
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Great Poem. I liked. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest Violet Nightfall
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The format to this added a lot to the emotional value, I like the blank at the end as well, made me ponder if I'd say those words.
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interesting write
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