Heart salivating,
beneath vacillating skin.
Needing,
to nourish the porphyriac.
Author notes
Prompt: 'Blood is thicker than water, and much tastier.'
10 Words
A contest entry
- dark quickie by And Hyetal.
335 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes....Or Does It? by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique my work if you feel this needs improving
Comments
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and then this is where I'm told to go to dictionary.com
LOL
dark write, but educated; by your word usage you've really given this piece a different type of feel as a dark write -
ooh, interesting and dark write. I love all the emotion put into it for such a short poem.
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