It's kills me to see you looking like that
all hunched over and doughy eyed.
You used to be vivacious
Now you are just a shell.
It amazes me that you let him affect you that way.
And I don't believe you've picked up smoking.
What's that all about
Dear sister you mean the world to me
and I don't want to see you in an early grave.
What can I do to help?
What do you think?
Comments
-
ouch!!
this hit me very hard becasue my older brother is this way to me.
i scare him so many times with the life im liveing. but still he knows not what to do.
amazingly done hun
vanna -
Good job!
A brother's concern is so important! I know I value my brother opinion. A prayer wouldn't hurt.
Regards,
Jennifer
-
Good job!
A brother's concern is so important! I know I value my brother opinion. A prayer wouldn't hurt.
Regards,
Jennifer
Adding your comment:
