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A Canyon

High-flying Angels,

Looking down, you observe all

Of Times weathered works.





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I don't do Haikus much.

A contest entry

Mistakes? Improvements that need to be made? Tips and tricks? I'd like some advice please.

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  • Kelli Marie
    July 5, 2008
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    I enjoyed the read and where you allowed the picture to take you. A lovely write. This link might aid you in future haiku. It is more of a modern teaching I think, though it has the soul of haiku within it. Thank you for entering.
    http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2340132
    Kelli