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As I Appear



Deadly sweet in life,
yet cold shoulders wait.

My body indicates your motives
because my mouth invokes you so.

I wish to lure you to your death,
so please follow......




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http://porcelainveins.deviantart.com/art/masquerade-v2-88183271



30 words

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 12, 2008

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    Very interesting poem. I love the darkness of it. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    July 4, 2008

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    *following* hehe..... great job here .... love it much..... congrats on the HM altho could have been a gold to me.... thanks for sharing this


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    Ohh a darkly seductive and deadly write! Excellent take !


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 3, 2008
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    Opps---Forgot clappies


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 3, 2008
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    Wow--Very Intense--Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!!

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