Deadly sweet in life,
yet cold shoulders wait.
My body indicates your motives
because my mouth invokes you so.
I wish to lure you to your death,
so please follow......
Author notes
Credit Artist:
http://porcelainveins.deviantart.com/art/masquerade-v2-88183271
30 words
A contest entry
- 1 hour quickie.. prompt up! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 3, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold (2) by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended July 17, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Very interesting poem. I love the darkness of it. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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*following* hehe..... great job here .... love it much..... congrats on the HM altho could have been a gold to me.... thanks for sharing this
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Ohh a darkly seductive and deadly write! Excellent take !


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Opps---Forgot clappies


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Wow--Very Intense--Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!!
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