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The Game

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Lip's lace

woven in sultry,

satin whispers.

Silky sayings

stroking across

heart's layers.

 

Night's chamber,

undresses seduction's

provocative masquerade.

 

Her wiles

silent victor,

allowing him

illusion in championship

of desire's verbal joust,  

she reads clearly

as lust's transparent charade.

Author notes

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Credit Artist:

http://porcelainveins.deviantart.com/art/masquerade-v2-88183271

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 4

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    illusion in championship of desire's verbal joust,
    she reads clearly as lust's transparent charade.wonderful decription within your words I can see why you snagged the gold congratulations on your shiny


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 3
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    Congratulations on the well-deserved Gold award---Well Done!!

  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 3

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    Your Verbal excellence continues in this composition--
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 3

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    Beautiful imagery and such a sensual sultry feel to it! Love it!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 3

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    excellent~

    Just looked at the rules and the pic for the prompt
    Powerful imagery you have penned here as always....
    Lips lace woven in sultry satin whipers:
    Her wiles silent victor allowing him illusion in championship of lust's transparent charade...
    What a thought provoker you have penned here lil brother...
    Excellent as always
    May you get a Gold Trophy for this one
    It certainly would in my book
    Penned perfectly to a T
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

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