let me open a door for you,
that walks a very fine line.
I'll show you a great person,
who I wished was all mine.
Her heart is full of love,
she sails a great divide.
Once she sturs up the sea,
nothing can slow her tide.
Yet, there seems a calmness,
like a slow crackling fire.
She slightly glances at you,
and can't help but to desire.
She's the one I think about,
when darkness clouds my mind.
The way she smiles, and laughs,
I feel she's perfectly designed.
This woman has a very deep heart,
and my undying devotional respect.
Perhaps one day I hope as I walk,
i'll find a girl, like the one I met.
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i like this because it gives me an insight to someone who's openly felt this way about me. although his is much better than anything he could ever tell me.
i find it funny that it's called pipe dream, and that's what he calls him and i.. are you sure you're name isn't mike?
-amanda.
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Omg
oh wow dis poem is amazing i hope u find wat ur looking for -
Lovely romantic feel to this, I hope you do meet her!
Jeff
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this is sweet may we all get the one we desire, well writen and i liked the last 2 lines
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Excellent
A very fine romantic write; imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. And by the way, I've done a lot of dreaming, however, never inside of a pipe, yet when smoking my pipe, I do tend to day dream. Again, very well written. -
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Hi, Ryan, I just can't resist adding a footnote for you (lol):
http://www.answers.com/topic/pipe-dream
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The sad part, is I can't stop reading it... and I wish I could fix it. You mean a lot to me you know.
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