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Need

You once asked me
"Hey, where'd you go?  Not speaking to me now?"

I wanted to explain
There is no such place of "not" with you.
 
There is want...superceded by need
An addiction of Mennen...deepening the need.

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  • ErrantHeart
    August 12, 2008
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    Hey, now, short, simple, sweet.

    Oh yeah, the Mennen need. *sweats*



    Another great read.


  • humblpye gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Want, superceded by need...

    I like the terse feel of this poem, want "superceded by", and not "becoming..." carefully selected words, it's sad and perceptive, i can dig it

  • Just4u
    July 6, 2008

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    Even a "one sided" connection is still a connection,
    though yet now incomplete. Any connection, once made,
    can never again be fully separated, for there is a
    mixture of minds, hearts and souls that takes place,
    changing us forever...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • leo2
    July 4, 2008

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    When I had money it was fairly easy to differentiate between want and need. I could buy what I wanted and had what I needed but a poor man needs more than fanciful wishes to put beans on the table. I realize that's being a tad bit overly simplistic and your poem speaks of needs of the heart as well as the body.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long