*thump*I hit the ground.
A little blood, a few scrapes but nothing serious.
But why I have been laying here for hours,
I still don't know.
I can get up.
I mean my legs work and all of that.
But my body refuses to get up.
Its like my wi- thats it, my will.
I'm not physically hurt,
but my will has a deep cut to the heart
and even if I cant see it, i know that it is hurt.
But tell me, how do you heal a will?
I want to get up, to continue,
to look like everything is fine, but i mean
what can i do?
Does a will even have a heart to get hurt?
Or has my heart just lost its will?
A contest entry
- Rain by kales4.
450 points, ended July 21, 2008, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
has your heart ever lost its will?
Comments
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|Thank you for entering my contest. I really enjoyed the lines :
"Does a will even have a heart to get hurt?
Or has my heart just lost its will?"
They are such an interesting idea and i like how they compose one another. Great write and good luck
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