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Mistress Vamp

Something is burning deep within me
I've changed into someone else

my skin, eyes, and hair all changed
now I look even better then before

I feel alive, and so much better

Suddenly I remember the night before


As you lay down on the floor dying
I drank your blood, and soul
It tasted so good, I continued on

Now, I want another drink from someone...

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Prompt - 'Blood is thicker than water, and much tastier.'
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  • nature mithya
    July 20, 2008

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    I don't believe in vamps.

    Is it not the other way around. men...
    lol
    Fine to see the reverse side does men some good.
    Congrats.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 4, 2008

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    o.O
    Devilish and sexy I love the creepy dark feeling of this


    Congrats on the HM hun
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love ya
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    July 4, 2008

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    how true that blood is thicker than water
    a fantastic take on the promt with vivid images and great emotions and congratulations on you honor


  • michichoeret
    July 4, 2008
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    wonderful


  • Tattboyspet
    July 4, 2008

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    lol - seems as though you speak from experience
    just kidding!

    congrats on the HM


  • And Hyetal
    July 3, 2008

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    Such a creative vampire story! It flows well and I think it's unique.


  • February Moon gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    Interview With A Vampire?
    I liked this!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    I think I saw that movie. It was awesome too! heheh

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