Come sit with me and tell me your Name.
Have we met before?
I feel I know your vastness
May we speak some more?
This open field portrays
the space between you and I
So still that it creates chaos
Yet without eachother we'd die
You seem so familiar
like and old fried who's always there
Tell me where you come from
Please answer, this silences is more than I can bare.
It's getting colder now
I think it's time to depart
It was nice to have your company
Now I'm going back to the start.
Author notes
Option 2: Lonely
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration with Options by Dancing Feather.
700 points, ended July 10, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wondeful poem I really enjoyed this one. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks.... Happy judging
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Sorry it's taking so long judging this contest. It should be done by later today or tomorrow =D
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Don't apologise, I'm new to this site and I am really enjoying but I can imagine it must be hard to judge the contests, with all the entries, and then trying to understand each individual poets writings. I know that some of the poems I write that I am the only one that understands it (usually I can tell by the look on my hubby's face whether he understood or not, usually it's a look of confusion ha ha ha ha). Have fun Violet Nightfall - cool name by the way
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Ah, I been on the site for about 2 years o.O wait a little oever two years. Its somes easy and sometimes hard judging contests. The hardest part is the trying to understand each right. By the way with this poem it was easy to figure out where you were going. You're having a conversation with someone who isn't there but you know who they are but just can't place it. =D
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Well nearly... it's a conversation with myself but I've been so lonely for so long that I no longer know who I am and keep having the same conversation over again "Now I'm going back to the start".
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At least I was close
I know the feeling of being lonely even though you're not alone you still feel like you are. (by the way, welcome to the site, try going into the chatterbox and chat area sometime. you'll meet a bunch of other poets just don't ask for reads)
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