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So It Goes

I can't stop it--
This ever-beating drumlike heart of mine,
It keeps in time.

I hesitate
To even take a breath,
Lest passion from my voice halts flow.

So it goes,
So it goes.

This melody
Reverberating hopes and wants
Inside my aching mind.

Did you know
That through these hidden meanings,
All this music made is yours?

So it goes,
So it goes.

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  • Breezie
    July 9
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    Wow. This is so deep. I love the metaphors. Great job!!!! I am at a loss for words!!!