Look At You All Fabulous Like, What Are You Hiding?
You May Think You Look Great On The Outside.
But In the Inside You Heart Is Slowly Dieing.
What Really Have You Got To Hide?
A Broken Heart.
Lots Of Scars.
All Of You Pictures Ripped Apart.
Because You Cant Stand Your Self By Far.
You Lie To the World Every Day.
With That Fake Ass Smile On Your Face.
You Say Everything Is Okay.
Keeping That Frown You Long For Encased.
You Walk Around Like Your One Of The Best.
But Really You Feel Lost and Alone Instead.
You Acually Feel Like Your Beyond Rest!
But You Love Those Dreams Where You End Up Dead.
Now That Doesnt Seem All That Right.
Little Miss Im Fine In This World.
Does It Hurt To See It All Plain It Sight?
Or Is Your Memory All Twirled?
Cause I Wouldent Want To Remeber It All.
Too Much For ME To Handle.
Not A Perfect Like Doll.
Admit it Your Life Is Hurtfull and Dull!
So Stop Lieing!
Let Those Tears Down
Cause If Your Life Is Slowly Dieing
Theres A Reason To Frown...
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this is so true. Many people walk around acting like everything is ok because they're afraid to reveal their true selves to the world. Those of us who do show that we're not perfect and we experience more emotions than happiness are labelled as "emo" or "gothic" or "crybaby"...but really those are the people who are real.
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nice. just nice.
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Hm.
This is a very good poem. Very true. And i must thanks you. Your one of the few active members in my goddamn group. :] thanks.
-Tye-
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overflowing with emotions
a great write
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wow. thats such an empowering and emotional poem. *looks overwhelmed*
i loved it!
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Great poem i loved it alot. :]]
Lovers,
Shelly
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awesomeness
Kool... I thinx it Rox!
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WOW!!!
Thats all I have to say,
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I really like this poem! ^_^. I agree it's very powerful! So many ppl hide their emotions and act as though it's all fine, But I belive that just kills the person more.....Very good poem, Again I really like it! Keep up the great work!
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oh wow that is a really good poem. Good job!
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pretttty
i loved it.i wish i could come up with some powerful poems like this.
<3's,
melody
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