The Good Life...

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  Cynthia Gaines
  July 27
  
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  Brilliant!!!

  I love the smooth flow of your whimsical rhyme, the wonderful imagery, and the cute li'l critters! This piece is absolutely priceless & precious!! You always come up with the darndest poems that just crack me up!!! Glad I dropped in on these two little mischevious guys tonight... wonder what they'll come up with tomorrow?!!? Peace, Cyn
  

  
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  RoseDaughter
  July 3
  
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  Its really gud

  Well done. I enjoyed reading the poem. I like the use of 'We' in the poem ,it makes me feel included. Good job!
  
  We best get reinforcements
  We cant do this on our own
  We'll never get back to the kennel
  With this enormous bone
  
  We're rich I tell ya its plain to see
  Just look at this lovely boodle
  This time next week we'll look so sheik
  Like a gorgeous fluffy french poodle
  
  We'll have a monogrammed cushion
  Our very own hand painted dish
  We'll dine on steak and caviar
  Thats the stuff from that funny lookin fish
  
  Yes we'll really be living the high life
  Its plain for all to see
  All we have to do is get this home
  Then its the good life for you and m
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    Celticpoet
    July 3
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    Thank you

    I appreciate your comment on my wee write...walk in peace and light poet..regards Dan x
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  sunshinegirl
  July 3
  
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  Dad,
  
  I love this!!! OMG!!! I can almost see that happening! and those little dogs.... how fun! I got to start looking for one for my mom again...
  
  Great job as always!
  
  and love
  
  Nyetta

  
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    Celticpoet
    July 3
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    Laughing out loud!

    Glad you enjoyed this wee giggle I wrote..hope your ok?..lotsa luv n hugs..Dad xxxx
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      sunshinegirl
      July 3
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      Yes dad, I am fine.. How about you? I have had three amazing days in a row, and well just amazing
      
      xoxoxox