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The Good Life...

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We best get reinforcements
We cant do this on our own
We'll never get back to the kennel
With this enormous bone

We're rich I tell ya its plain to see
Just look at this lovely boodle
This time next week we'll look so sheik
Like a gorgeous fluffy french poodle

We'll have a monogrammed cushion
Our very own hand painted dish
We'll dine on steak and caviar
Thats the stuff from that funny lookin fish

Yes we'll really be living the high life
Its plain for all to see
All we have to do is get this home
Then its the good life for you and me

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  • Brilliant!!!

    I love the smooth flow of your whimsical rhyme, the wonderful imagery, and the cute li'l critters! This piece is absolutely priceless & precious!! You always come up with the darndest poems that just crack me up!!! Glad I dropped in on these two little mischevious guys tonight... wonder what they'll come up with tomorrow?!!? Peace, Cyn

  • Its really gud

    Well done. I enjoyed reading the poem. I like the use of 'We' in the poem ,it makes me feel included. Good job!

    We best get reinforcements
    We cant do this on our own
    We'll never get back to the kennel
    With this enormous bone

    We're rich I tell ya its plain to see
    Just look at this lovely boodle
    This time next week we'll look so sheik
    Like a gorgeous fluffy french poodle

    We'll have a monogrammed cushion
    Our very own hand painted dish
    We'll dine on steak and caviar
    Thats the stuff from that funny lookin fish

    Yes we'll really be living the high life
    Its plain for all to see
    All we have to do is get this home
    Then its the good life for you and m

    • Celticpoet gold member
      July 3
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      Thank you

      I appreciate your comment on my wee write...walk in peace and light poet..regards Dan x
  • Dad,

    I love this!!! OMG!!! I can almost see that happening! and those little dogs.... how fun! I got to start looking for one for my mom again...

    Great job as always!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Celticpoet gold member
      July 3
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      Laughing out loud!

      Glad you enjoyed this wee giggle I wrote..hope your ok?..lotsa luv n hugs..Dad xxxx
      • Yes dad, I am fine.. How about you? I have had three amazing days in a row, and well just amazing

        xoxoxox
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