she wiped her face
and smiled
she liked the taist
she licked her fingers
as not to waist
this was her first time
and she would never go back
to that low class drink
water
she has taisted the blood
and liked it
Author notes
sorry it was 11 lines
A contest entry
- dark quickie by And Hyetal.
335 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any other topics i should try to wright about?
Comments
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Nice!
This was awesome! You have a lot of talent and it seems you have a thing for short poems.JK! This was absolutely amazing and good luck in the contest! Keep it up!^_^
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I really liked this.
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and she would never go back
to that low class drink
water
I really loved those lines.
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