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Fine.
If you really feel that way,
she'll leave.

But
before she goes,
she has one question.

Why did you do it?

Did it make you feel better?
Did you like seeing your wife in pain?
Pain,
that you caused.

And why didn't you stop?
Was my pain enjoyable?
Did it become addictive?

Or did you really hate her that much?

Now she's leaving,
forever.

Just what you wanted.

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Written for a special friend of mine.

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 22

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    Pain and anger.. I feel it yet do not know if it is my emotions that I feel while reading this or if it is yours....Anyway this is a wonderful poem.. very expressive in many ways..


    Angel
  • Father this is amazing. Thank you for sharing the write. I so know how this feels Am in that area of pain now as you well know. Thank you much for this
  • ooo whos this written for father?
    it is a very lovely poem,
    its extremely heartfelt and im sure many will relate,
    is this wirtten for leona?
    all my love,
    kitty xx