When will she learn that everyone lies,
that nice people hurt and strong people cry.
When will she realize that no one cares,
that just because they promised, doesnt mean they'll be there.
When will she know that her life means nothing at all,
that just because someone holds you up, that doesnt mean they wont let you fall.
When will she learn that love is just a word,
that just because they dont respond doesnt mean thay hadnt heard.
When will she realize that this world is full of pain,
that the people who give up arn't the ones who are insane.
When will she know that hate is all around,
that theres people who want her to fall to the ground.
When will she learn that life is just a fight,
that it's so much easier to just say that they're right.
When will she realize shes falling apart,
that she has been, from the very start.
When will she know that shes lost the game,
that no matter what, things will never be the same.
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i know this isnt very good
it makes sense to me and thats all i can shoot for right now
Please tell me what you think
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strong
i share your sorrow. start is brother to the quit. giving up open new and interesting doors. perhaps a new start.
you are a strong writer. many golds to you.
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thank you so much
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Fine
Right to the point, ghastly as that point is. It's tough losing faith in dreams, and that's what you've captured.
Some spelling bits, but it's OK. Good words, rhyme, and rhythm.
I hope this young lady can find the strength to find her way beyond this!
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thank you so much. im not sure i can, but im sure as hell trying.
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Over, under, around, or through -- there is a way. Good Luck!
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perfect
it was wonderfully written i could pick out my favorite lines because they were all my favorite by far this is my favorite poem lol. Anyways i would to say thnxs on commenting my poem and i would like to say that i have felt like this and just know that there will always be a tomorrow so dont live in yesterday it will get easier
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thank you so much
your poems were really amazing.
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Well you can never give up some people only pretend to let you fall and pretend to hate and lose love for you, but they still keep it safe to themselves because they're afraid to lose those feelings. We're never truly alone in this world because even those we hurt will eventually forgive us and may even want our companionship/friendship again. This is a good write full of emotion and angst but at the same time you've paved your own path to hope because you haven't given up yet and you never should. Hopefully those people that you have hurt will forgive you and they'll seek your forgiveness for letting you fall. I hope everything turns out good for you. Keep writing.
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