Oh! So delicious
sliding into
my mouth
Devine fruit
of the God’s
creamy and smooth
tongue savors
every bite
sensational delights
leaving me
sighing
for more
A contest entry
- Summer Fruit winner gets to hold another one. by cricketjeff.
800 points, ended July 19, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great expression for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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A rather lovely evocation, I am glad I have a bowl of strawberries to hand while judging!
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if you dont have the second stanza, it can interpret differently...as the title about 'juicy' .LOL
success in your contest
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Yummy! Very well penned Sie and all the best in the contest.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Eating is akin to sensuality. Wonderful writing Sie. I want that. Haha. It is such a mouth-watering piece of work. Your descriptions really stands out. Good luck in the contest Sie.
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Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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