You and I
clasping one star
adjoining hearts
that love -
embracing our
wishes of forever
A contest entry
- 15 words by Melissa Gayle.
1400 points, ended July 7, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awe, this was so neat. I like the way you mingled stars and "wishes" into the piece. Very symbolic.
Much love
Carrie

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I love the simplicity in this.
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Stars and forever, like this a lot...so expressive...PK


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Pkid! Its been so long...thank you for the beautiful comment.
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very sweet..
thoughts of love, it never gets old! good stuff Lady L. Lots of luck to you in the contest!

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thankyou so much...for being so supportive.
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Wonderfully romantic, beautiful imagery. Loved this.


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Thank you so much sweet,Kiran.
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Love you sweetie.
Write on. One.
Dez

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Thank you Dez. Smile.
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