My heart patters
like rain on a tin roof
everytime you flash that smile.
My soul cries
like sweet songbirds sing
you make my life worthwhile.
My hands tremble
like leaves in the breeze
whenever you hold me tight.
My skin tingles
like pins and needles
you make everything alright.
Author notes
Just thought I'd write about my Luis again LOL!
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Sigh!! How wonderful to have a love like this in your life! I would only wish for such feelings...
Absolutely lovely!!
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Ah So sweet
I loved the rhyme of this write, Like how you have different styles. Well enjoyed. LISA
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awww this is ubber sweet and wonderful, lovely write and good luck in the contest
takecare
stephanie
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Awww...can feel the love here..want hubby to be hjome right now form office..*sigh* will have to wait another 2 hours!
All the best in the contest!
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Luis is one special guy to have such deeply passionate words penned about him. Warm, sweet words indeed. Good luck in the contest.
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Great i loved this alot my favorite part was when you said "My soul cries
like sweet songbirds sing
you make my life worthwhile.
My hands tremble
like leaves in the breeze
whenever you hold me tight." thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
Fantastic!
Good pen!
That's how Jamie and I feel as well! -
Beautiful written
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Thank you
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