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Auspicious Event

A rare event
An auspicious night
A day to remember
To put something right
Its a full moon
So royal and blue
So make a wish
Something true
Close to your heart
A piece of desire
Something for you
The moon will sire
A simple wish
An effortless change
Your hunting bow
HAs a longer range
You catch more game
You shoot more foe
It was the moon
Remember you know
So the next blue moon
That rare event
Gods be blessed
Heaven sent
Aupicious times
For a transparant moon
Live for yourself
Its coming soon

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Option 5 - Blue Moon

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  • Dancing Feather gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Great poem. I really liked it. The words flow beautifully. Keep up the great work
    Good luck in the contest.

    Violet Nightfall


  • stevens5613
    July 7, 2008

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    Very good poem here sexy, full of enthusiasm and mystery, simply a magnificient write, and great top read one of your poems again

    Blessed be
    Chris
    XXX


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 6, 2008

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    great write sis

    good luck in the contest

    xxx cheeky xxx