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Video Fangs

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Along the California coast in Santa Carla's land

two Arizona teenagers and their mom hope to find paradise.

Living with Grandpa Emerson

among his world of taxidermy oddities, but no television,

a place that Michael and Sam quickly discover

is home to blood sucking teens,

who dine at night in gruesome feast,

dead ending up posters on missing person posters.

 

Oh how the tale unfolds,

in its center, mild mannered, Max, local video store owner,

smiling, soft face, with thick glasses,

affable nature that Sam feels is such con,

yet he acts so gentle and friendly,

not a chance he was part of fiendish gang of fangs.

 

Michael ignoring the fact because

vixen Star had lured him into David's vampire den,

waking to find he is now among those with taste for heart juices.

 

Sam finds alliance with new pals, the Frog Brothers,

they set a trap for Max at dinner with mother, Lucky,

but he passes test and they search elsewhere for the head vampire.

 

Then comes the final clash in the Emerson's home,

with Sam and Frog brother battle intruders

all slain in creative ways before clash between Michael and David.

 

Victory eluding when Max arrives finally revealing his true idenity,

in the end Grandpa saves the day, crashing through the wall

his jeep throwing wooden pointed log through Max's chest.

 

By subtle flair and curl of lips this flick says a simple morale,

sometimes youth may have its passions and energy,

however, age and wisdom with calm confidence

can still leave its mark upon time.

(Also leaving haunting doubts about guy behind video store counter.) 

Author notes

Image from: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lost_Boys

Characters mentioned:
Max
Grandpa Emerson
Lucy Emerson
Michael and Sam Emerson
Frog Brothers
Davd
Star

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 4

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    how true these words are that age and wisdom and calmness can leave its mark upon time as experiance is the eneryof life and as we get older we have more experiance to share wonderful poem but these words say so much after all we can only write about what we know and have learned and its that writing that has the best impact
    sometimes youth may have its passions and energy,however, age and wisdom with calm confidence
    can still leave its mark upon time.good luck in the contest

  • excellent~

    I have heard of the Lost Boys so I can say that much at least
    And we must be on the same wave length..I went to the library today and checked out some books on Vampires..now is that odd or what...All last week I read the Dark Hunter series...and at least Lucky did pass the test...
    And as with the last paragraph age and wisdom can and does leave it's mark upon time...
    I am hoping I penning this one correct....
    Just took a pain pill about an hour ago...so I am hoping my comment makes some sembalance of sense here...
    Best of luck in the contest...
    This is a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • That was an awesome poem. Never heard of the losts boys though. Haha So, I really don't understand the poem, but still great job though. Keep on writing.
  • Wonderful! I love the last stanza, so true! Thanks for your entry, good luck!