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Crescendo

In the crescendo of life there is
a melody that sings out with the
playing of the score of harmony in
the never ending overture of the
vibration with the cleft of your
song.

 

The notes that are played on the

heart strings of life soar with the

music of the violins song, diminutive

in its musical  scale towards the ending

of the bass  speaker in the ears of my

love 

Author notes

Cresendo, scale, notes, harmony,score, overture, vibration, cleft, melody, diminuative, strings


Abariel Ravox


It just came to me to use it as a kinda story of life and perhaps love

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  • Starlight-Owl
    September 7

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    I liked the flow of this, and you certainly picked your title well. It somewhat told a story, but was also left wide open for individual interpretation. I enjoyed reading this write. You didn't use a lot of "fluff" words which helped you a great deal. You only used words that enhanced your writing. Excellent.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    July 3

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    this is really good,
    full of wonderful alive imagery,
    the highlighting of certain words really bought up the poem to life, all my love,
    kitty xx