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Turned

The funeral was at dawn,
cold, the breeze;
she sat, weeping
aching for him.
She turned, hiding
the tears for no one.
He was her lover
a mothers son.
Now, a corpse entombed
in cold, rainy morn.

Now she sits
wrapped in misery
refusing to speak
to anyone,anywhere.
the doctors say,
maybe, one day,
she'll come back
and start to care.
But for now, as she did
she turns away.

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based on Option 4 - Hiding Yourself from Others

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A contest entry

simplistic, but aimed at a different idea of the pic.

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  • Wonderful Poem. I really liked it. Good luck in the contest and thank you for the entry. Violet Nightfall