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Memory Lane

Sitting on my doorstep watching up at the sky...
I see a large and long school bus pass by.

Suddenly the past returns to my mind...
Of some moments that were left behind.

Every time I see one on the street...
I wonder about the friends I had or might meet.

Yeah I remember those days...
They were very special in many ways.

Shows a place in my mind that will always remain...
Those yellow buses always send me through memory lane.

I remember all the many books...
My first crush on a girl and her good looks.

No one can forget the moments at lunch...
Nothing was better then pizza with fruit punch.

How about human growth and development...
We would always keep it as an open understatement.

Loved physical education on the school courts...
Everyone played so many countless sports.

Ah the past that will never return is what's to blame...
Sending me to moments I've gone as it moves about memory lane.

Now is when I believe those days went by so fast...
Some of my friends thought forever they were going to last.

When finally we got out of school...
We raced to the one place that was so cool.

Headed over to the largest center in arcades...
Now that I think about it I haven't been there in decades.

I still know the songs to the band I had...
Man, everyone thought we were so rad!

One day I will gain legendary fame...
Then I'll become more then what everyone would claim...
Placing each and every single memory in a golden frame...
Or in a diamond picture album so they stay the same...
I'll always live those seconds of memory lane.

A yellow school bus can bring memories... Naturally.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    September 2
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    have you ever tried your hand at free verse? i think you would be good at it. of course, if you need a teacher i can make myself available. Lane


    • Climax gold member
      September 2
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      Myself? Where?!

      *LOL!*

      • Dalaney gold member
        September 2

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        we have a storm blowin' our way, boy, it just might blow you up here if so, bring your pad and pen...and, an apple

        • Climax gold member
          September 2
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          Muuuuuahahahhaha!

          *laughs off his seat*

          • Dalaney gold member
            September 2
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            ow...did that hurt??

            • Climax gold member
              September 2
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              I want you to hurt me...


              • Dalaney gold member
                September 2
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                no, i will not hurt you...
                drive you crazy a little, but not
                hurt you. i think you've been hurt
                enough
  • this is amazing....very good way to show what it will be like to remember and to the people in school to live those days well.....VERY VERY GOOD (what else)
    love ya,

    MR


  • Darkmoon
    July 5
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    good poem! i hope you keep writing!
  • I love the ryming and the word choice was amazing!
    Love the poem! Very well writen.
    ~Katiexoxo


    • Climax gold member
      July 3
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      Awesome! You are invited to read more of my poems when ever you likes!!!

      Stay cool and Rock-N-Rule!
  • this is a very nice poem dear,
    i love the memories you suppress in this poem,
    its so touchin and lovely,
    full of vivid imagery,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx
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