I知 a warrior fighting for peace
Killing human souls in the name of harmony
So we can live together without war.
I am a man with a gun
Turning it upon those no different than me
So my children will not fear them.
I am a soldier dying for a cause
Everyone voices, but none believe in.
I kill for tranquility.
Author notes
Wrote it awhile ago. I'm really into the whole world peace thing... especially whats going on in Sudan.
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I Came To Return The Favor
This poem speaks volumes - I'm glad to meet a fellow peacenik - you read my poem "Iraq Attack" - and I loved your comments - I am 71 years young and I am amazed at your wisdom when it comes to war and peace - for someone that is 16 - you are our future - righteousness cannot be administered out of the barrel of a gun - you may like my poem "The Garden Gate" - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) ---------------------------------------------- hagd
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thank you so much!!!! I am on my way to read that poem!
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Nice job Ashley, I hadn't read this one of yours before. read it at the next STAND meeting!!! I especially love the last two lines!!! Post some work hon!!!
Kara
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lol
thanks Kara
We'll see... you know I'm not really one who likes to read...
I'll post more! ....eventually! haha
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Very well written. Me, I think the war over there is pointless. :/ But still... fighting for peace? Why can't we just TALK it over? Why must we bring in guns? Why must we kill? Why must we kill those different than us? Who said we were afraid of those people? I truly am not, I want to make peace, by words, not war. But very nice poem.
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I Agree As Well
Lets wage peace - not war - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) ----------------------------------------------- hagd -
Lol, thanks for the comment. I definately agree... ^.^
Ash
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